A practical guide to creating learning slide shows: part 3 – the narration

Practical guidesIn the first part of this practical guide, we discussed the potential of stand-alone slide presentations as a tool for learning. In the second installment, we looked at the visual element in the presentation – the slides. This time we look at the auditory component – the narration.

Packaging up a live presentation

The way you approach the narration will depend on whether you are (1) packaging up a presentation that you have previously delivered live, or (2) creating a stand-alone slide show from scratch. In the case of the former, the presentation will most likely represent you and your perspective on the topic in hand – you will want to record the voiceover yourself and retain as much of the personality of the original presentation as possible. That means keeping it natural and informal. Assuming you didn’t read from a script when you presented live (and let’s hope that’s the case), then you won’t want to read from a script now. Try to capture the buzz of the live presentation by imagining you are presenting to a live audience. Or why not record it live? You can always edit it down afterwards to remove any superfluous elements.

Public speaker
If you're packaging up a presentation you delivered live, you'll want to retain its personality.

Designing specifically for stand-alone use

On the other hand, you may be designing a slide show that will only ever be used as a piece of learning content. It is not intended as a personal statement and it won’t be attributed to you. In this case you are almost definitely best off writing a script and you should seriously consider using a professional voiceover artist to deliver this. Why? Because professional voiceover artists are very good at reading a script so it doesn’t sound like they’re reading a script. By and large, the rest of us aren’t.

Script for speaking

When scripting, it’s hard to avoid slipping into report writing mode. Keep reminding yourself that the words you are writing will be read aloud, not read from the screen. Try saying the words out loud yourself and keep revising them until you can put them across effortlessly.

Voiceover artist
Remember your script will be read aloud, not as a report.

Use a conversational tone

Whatever you do, avoid ‘corporate drone’. Write as you would speak. That means short sentences, simple language, the active voice (“The cat ate the mouse” not “The mouse was eaten by the cat”), and a free use of contractions (“I can’t remember …” not “I cannot remember …”). You can also help the voiceover artist by making absolutely clear (perhaps in bold type) which words need special emphasis.

Don’t duplicate your voiceover as on-screen text

Your learner’s brain can cope with one verbal channel (in this case the voiceover) but not two. If words are coming at you from two places at once, you’ll just overload. If absolutely necessary, emphasise key points and headings with on-screen text, but please don’t display your script verbatim.
Coming next: distribution

A practical guide to creating learning slide shows: part 2 – the slides

Practical guidesIn the first part of this practical guide, we reviewed the capabilities of, and applications for, packaged slide presentations as a tool for learning. In this second installment, we look in more detail at the visual element in the presentation – the slides. Next time we’ll examine the best ways to go about recording a narration.

What your slides must achieve

If your slide show is going to be packaged with an audio narration, then your slides have very much the same function as they would do in a live presentation – they convey the visual element, while a voice delivers the words. In this context, slides are visual aids. With photographs, illustrations, diagrams and charts, they capture the viewer’s attention, clarify meaning and improve retention. With the sparing use of on-screen text, they can also help to reinforce key elements of the verbal content, but the prime purpose is always visual.
Without narration, your slides have to accomplish both roles – the visual and the verbal. In this respect they need a very different design focus to a live presentation. Take the following example of a slide taken from a live presentation that was converted to stand alone, without narration, on slideshare.net. A section of the slide has been allocated to a running textual commentary, essentially a much simplified version of the original presenter’s words:

Slides with ot without narration
When there is no narration, the slide must be amended to include the verbal information,

Not that this is the only way of displaying the verbal content. If, rather than converting a live presentation, you were designing a stand-alone and un-narrated slide show from scratch, you could use all sorts of devices to display the words, like the speech bubbles used in this example:
A slide with a thought bubble
There are many ways to incorporate the narrative into the slides.

Another consideration is the distance from which your slides will be viewed. In a live presentation, your audience is likely to be some way from the screen, whereas when the slides are used for self-study, they will be up close. Whether this matters depends on the device the audience will be using to view the presentation (this could be anything from a smart phone to a large PC monitor) and the size of the window in which your presentation will be displayed. You may be able to get away with displaying more detail than you would when live, but this needs testing.

An argument for imagery

Only an expert wordsmith can conjure up with words what a person, object or event actually looks like. Only an expert teacher can explain a concept or process clearly using words alone. And only a wonderful presenter can make a lasting impact on an audience without the use of imagery. As the saying goes, “a picture is worth ten thousand words”. Pictures show, quite effortlessly, what things really look like. They clarify concepts and processes. They stick in the memory. All you have to do is use them.

Charts make meaning from the numbers
Charts clarify numeric data that might otherwise be indigestible.

Pictures come in a variety of forms to suit different situations. Photographs portray what things look like; diagrams clarify concepts and processes; illustrations make the abstract more memorable. Presentation software such as PowerPoint makes it easy to employ pictures in all these forms. Your task is to avoid the lazy option – clip art – and to find the picture that really does tell a story.

Break the mould

It’s all too simple to use the standard templates provided by your presentation software, but these won’t always do justice to your images. Take these two examples:

Break free from the templates
The title doesn't have to be centred at the top of the screen - it can be positioned to complement the image.

Avoid the standard templates
Again, with a little care you can break the mould. Here the image has been tinted blue.

You can definitely do without the slide junk – the logos, headers and footers that appear on every slide. There’s a place for your logo and that’s on the title slide (OK and maybe at the end as well). And you don’t really need all that clutter at the bottom of each slide – you’re producing slides, remember, not a report.
Remove the slide junk
Remove the slide junk - your corporate communications department doesn't always know best.

Text is also OK in moderation
You’ve probably heard of the expression “death by PowerPoint”. You’ve probably experienced it.
Death by PowerPoint
Admit it, you've been there ...

Yes, we’ve all been there, and yet we put up with it – see The Emperor’s New Slide Show.
Well, by far the biggest complaint you will hear from presentation audiences is that the slides contain too much text. In his book The Great Presentation Scandal, John Townsend relates how he counted the number of words and figures on every slide at a conference he was attending. The overall average was 76. That’s right, 76.
Too much text
If you've got two levels of bullets then you've no longer got a visual aid.

Given this, you may find it surprising that we could be recommending the use of text as a visual aid when the real problem is that there’s far too much of it. This is a fair point, but text can be useful as a visual aid, when you need to highlight the start of a new section, emphasise a key point, list a number of related points or present data in the form of a table.
If you do keep the amount of text on your slides to a minimum, it will have that much more impact when it does appear; particularly if you know when to use it and how to lay it out like the professionals. If you obey a few simple guidelines, that’s what you will achieve.

Use your slides to tell a story

A presentation is much more than a collection of independent thoughts accompanied by visual aids – however interesting the thoughts and however brilliant the visuals. Just like a novel, a radio play or a film, it has a beginning, an end and a carefully planned route in between.
Too many presentations look like they have been constructed by simply extracting slides from previous presentations. Although re-using slides is fine, if they are appropriate to the task in hand, this is never going to be enough to do the job. Like a film director, you have to look at the big picture, using words and images to manipulate your audience’s attention and their emotions. There is no black art to this; you just need a little imagination and a simple structure.
Coming next: the narration

The Emperor's New Slide Show


Once upon a time there lived a vain Emperor whose only worry in life was to impress his subjects with the extraordinary quality of his business presentations. He developed new slide shows almost every day and loved to show them off to his people.
Word of the Emperor’s tremendous presentations spread over his kingdom and beyond. Two scoundrels, named Bill and Bob, who had heard of the Emperor’s vanity, decided to take advantage of it. They introduced themselves at the gates of the palace with a scheme in mind.

“We are two very good software designers and after many years of research we have invented an extraordinary method for the creation of visual aids that is so advanced and automated in its design that it almost completely eliminates the need for any serious creative effort on your part, thus allowing you to develop more presentations more quickly than ever before. As a matter of fact, we have streamlined this system to such an extent that most of your slides will look just like text to anyone who is too stupid and incompetent to appreciate their quality.”
The chief of the guards heard the scoundrels’ strange story and sent for the court chamberlain. The chamberlain notified the prime minister, who ran to the Emperor and disclosed the incredible news. The Emperor’s curiosity got the better of him and he decided to see the two scoundrels.
“Besides being almost entirely text, your Highness, these slides will have a uniformity of style and design that will make almost every slide look exactly the same, reinforcing your imperial branding. And there are other benefits too. Rather than having to rehearse your presentation, you will be able to read your notes right off the screen. And no more wasted hours developing handouts – simply print out your slides and all the words will be there.” The emperor gave the two men a bag of gold coins in exchange for a multi-site license to use the remarkable new software in all of the Emperor’s many residences and offices.

The Emperor set to work on his first presentation. Amazingly, just as Bill and Bob had promised, he was able to put together his slides in a matter of minutes. He called the Prime Minister in for a preview. “That’s strange, ” thought the PM. “All I can see is slide after slide of bullet points, presented in a mind-numbingly uniform imperial branding. Where are all the photos, the diagrams, the charts and the video clips that made the Emperor’s presentations so famous?”
But before querying this with the Emperor, he thought again: “If all I see is text, then that means I’m stupid! Or, worse, incompetent!” If the prime minister admitted that he could only see text, he would be discharged from his office.”

What a marvellous slide show, Emperor,” he lied. “So minimalist, so … so consistent.” Encouraged by this positive response, the Emperor set about using his new software to develop presentations at such a rate that soon almost all the government’s time was spent in attending them. No-one could criticise the monotonous nature of the Emperor’s slide shows without being accused of stupidity and risking their job. Exacerbating the situation, The Emperor ordered all his officials to develop presentations of their own to provide him with daily updates on matters of state.
One day, a schoolchild on a job placement scheme was invited to sit in on one of the Emperor’s presentations. Bored silly by the slides and aware that most of the audience was losing consciousness, he couldn’t help but remark to those around him: “These slides are just text. They’re not visual aids at all. In fact, this presentation’s a load of xxxx.”

“Fool!” his supervisor snapped. “Don’t talk nonsense!” He grabbed the child and took him away. But the boy’s remark, which had been heard by practically everyone except, luckily, the Emperor, who was too busy reading his script from the screen, was repeated over and over again until everyone cried: “He’s right, you know, it is just text. There are no real visuals and this presentation’s just a load of xxxx.”
And you know what? They were right.


The Emperor’s New Slide Show is extracted from the award-winning 2003 CD-ROM Ten Ways to Avoid Death by PowerPoint.  The wonderful pictures are from David Kori.

A practical guide to creating learning slide shows: part 1

Practical guidesIn a learning context, slides have traditionally been used as ‘speaker support’ – visual aids to support live presentations. However, slide shows produced using Microsoft’s PowerPoint or Apple’s Keynote also provide a useful way to deliver packaged content for self-directed learning. This practical guide explores the potential for packaged slide shows as a learning tool and describes the many ways in which these can be developed and deployed.

Slides as speaker support
Slides have traditionally been used primarily for speaker support

Media elements

A slide show can incorporate all major media elements. Although the dominant forms are always likely to be still images and text, presentation software also makes it possible to animate the text and images on slides, as well as to import audio and video.

Interactive capability

As we shall see, there are many ways of distributing slide shows. Many of these are essentially passive – you watch the slide show as you would a video. Although some formats – including native PowerPoint – have the potential for quite sophisticated interactivity, this is not the normal use of packaged slide shows and we will not be examining this application in any detail in this practical guide.
As passive media, the use of packaged slide shows is largely limited to the following learning strategies:
Exposition – required viewing as part of a set curriculum
Exploration – as developmental material for use by learners at their own discretion
Slide shows could also act as supporting material within other strategies – instruction and guided discovery – but only as one element in a blend.

Applications

While limited in terms of interactive capability, slide shows have a great many applications. Even without narration, they can provide a visually-dynamic and engaging way to present relatively small chunks of learning content. Where they are less suitable is in presenting large bodies of text. Text is much more satisfactorily handled on a web page or in a PDF, both of which more easily allow the reader to search and scan.

WIkipedia page
If you want to present lots of text, you're better off using a web page

When combined with an audio narration, slide shows take on many of the characteristics of video, allowing the learner to maintain visual focus on a sequence of images while these are explained in audio. Obviously if the intention is to depict actual events, in full motion, slides will not do as well as material captured with a video camera.

Formats

You have a wide range of distribution formats to choose from, each with its own distinct capabilities:

Animation? Interactivity? Narration? Easy distribution?
Native PowerPoint/Keynote Yes Yes Yes Yes if users have the application used to create
the presentation
PDF No No No Yes
Flash (using tools such as Articulate, Adobe Presenter or Snap! by Lectora) Yes Yes Yes Must be uploaded to an LMS/web server
Video Yes No Yes Yes but large files
SlideShare No No Only with special ‘Slidecasting’ facility Yes if users have Internet access.You can embed the
presentations in blogs and web pages

We’ll be examining these options in much more detail in future postings.
Coming next: creating the slides